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Crash
Dec 11, 2009 14:01:06 GMT -5
Post by lolliqueen on Dec 11, 2009 14:01:06 GMT -5
Name: Crash
Nickname: None
Age In Moons: 245 moons
Clan: Will join the Moon Dragons
Description: Crash is a large sea blue dragon with a cream under belly. The male is very strong and fast, he has purple antler horns that are at least 2 feet and curl around like sheep horns at the top and violet purple eyes. His tail is blue but the tip is purple.
He has coal black claws that a very long and sharp. Crash is 45' feet, his wings are blue with a creamy blue under them (Like his body) , Crash's wings are 20 feet long and 13 meters across.
History: The large male was born in a small cave and lived there until he was 37 moons. He then left when the cave became too cramped.
Other: Crash can fly at the speed of lightning and can also breath red and purple fire.
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Crash
Dec 14, 2009 16:04:09 GMT -5
Post by Fury on Dec 14, 2009 16:04:09 GMT -5
Mmm... Well I apologize but I must reject your dragon. Just because you space out your description does not make it a proper paragraph for descriptions and such. We'd appreciate it if you wrote it to show the extent of your literature skills since we're fairly lax in most of the RP.
Also, the Moon Dragons cannot be instantly joined in such a manner. You'll have to RP your joining so you follow the rules.
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Crash
Dec 21, 2009 18:09:13 GMT -5
Post by lolliqueen on Dec 21, 2009 18:09:13 GMT -5
Is it better now? Sorry I'm not VERY used to this sort of rping....
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Crash
Dec 22, 2009 14:33:25 GMT -5
Post by Fury on Dec 22, 2009 14:33:25 GMT -5
A little. I went back and deleted a few spaces. Also, could you extend your history? It still doesn't meet our minimum requirement. We expect character development despite whatever style of roleplaying you are used to.
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