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Post by Venus on Sept 27, 2007 14:11:57 GMT -5
{Some of mine rhymes, some doesn't. This one doesn't xD I wrote it in a blur for a fanfiction I'm busy planning. One main verse for each story in the trilogy, and the end one for the end of the last.
If I get that far, which isn't likely with the workload I have xD But hey, I'm sharing it with you guys. Hope you like it! If you do, I'll post some of the rhyming prophecies.
It's titleless as of the moment, so if anyone has any suggestions...?
Sleep, child. It is time to rest. Spread the silver love Across your dreams. Flower in birth, Shine in the reflection of my shattered soul, And if I see even a fragment of you, Peaceful dreams shall rest within me Evermore.
Fall, child. It is time to fight. Draw your power to you From across the multiverses. Heal, Become whole. And once again piece my soul and shine - Shine to save the worlds, But condemn me to the fallen.
Rise, child. It is time to soar. Resurrect yourself from the ashes. Follow your entwined heart Along the path chosen for you Eons ago. Reach your destiny, Deny fate, And save those who have given in to the blackness.
For this is your story. And even when broken, I was with you. Every. Single. Step. Of. The. Way.
Well, there we go. Ignore the rubbish grammar and capitalization. It is meant to be like that xD
Comments appreciated ^^
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Post by Fury on Sept 27, 2007 14:14:25 GMT -5
Wow...rather good! Lovely wording...especially the ending with the short lines. It gives it a wonderful sense of finality. *applauds*
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Post by Venus on Sept 27, 2007 14:20:43 GMT -5
Wow, thanks Fury! *dances* I'm glad you like it ^^
I think at this rate the poem will be better than the story, which has ground to a rather long halt x.x
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Post by Fury on Sept 27, 2007 14:23:52 GMT -5
You're very welcome. Keep up the good work! It's alright...sometimes you just need a break. You'll come back to it eventually and feel ready to work.
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Post by Venus on Sept 27, 2007 14:26:17 GMT -5
True. Still trying to work out the odds and ends of the plot. Its akinda AU Sailormoon fic - I used to watch in when I was ill at home as a little girl xD So I thought I'd practice my writing by writing fanfiction. And that came to mind xD
The stories are called Dreambirth, Angelfall and Phoenixrise. Hopefully xD
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Post by Fury on Sept 27, 2007 14:28:45 GMT -5
lol I miss my Sailor Moon... ^^ I used to watch it all the time. o.0 Used to call myself 'Sailor Dragonburst' or something. lol. Cool titles!
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Post by Venus on Sept 27, 2007 14:31:52 GMT -5
Ta ^^ Lol, I'd totally forgotten about it until I stumbled on fanfiction xD That got me writing again xd
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Post by Fury on Sept 27, 2007 14:37:58 GMT -5
lol I remembered...It WAS Sailor Dragonburst...and I used to be all 'Transform!' and spin around really fast then jump and land in a ninja pose. XD! And I was all "DRAGON FIRE!" and would pick up a stick and spin it, pretending a huge fireblast came from it.
lol I luff SM. I can't wrte fanfic if I tried though lo
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Post by Venus on Sept 27, 2007 14:42:07 GMT -5
Lol! Never RPed it.
But I do enjoy writing it. I'll let you gusy know when I post it xD
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Post by Fury on Sept 27, 2007 14:51:46 GMT -5
YAYS! XD
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Post by Venus on Sept 27, 2007 14:59:48 GMT -5
I'll post you the link to my fanfiction bio thing, so you can read the two {incomplete} stories I've posted so far xxD
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Post by Venus on Sept 27, 2007 15:01:47 GMT -5
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Post by Fury on Sept 27, 2007 15:03:39 GMT -5
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