Post by alcas on Dec 25, 2008 19:05:30 GMT -5
Name: Archene (translation roughly means "bloodlust", but sometimes this has been used for "one of suffering" in the ancient tongue)
Nickname: Werefyre
Age In Moons: 78
Description: 10' tall 12' long
traditional Arthurian dragon. black back and gold stomach. called werefyre because blue shows through her scales whenever she prepares to breathe fire. 4 legs, four feet, five digits each.
The spikes along her back and on her tail are silver.She is a very reclusive dragon and will only warm up to a select few. She is fiercely protective of Thomas her rider but even he has trouble controlling her some times
History: (anything that I put that would interrupt the story please tell me and I will be happy to edit it) she was born in a Sarkan breeding program that breeds dragons in order to harvest their hearts, claws and other valuables. The Knights of Thrakia attacked the site and were able to steal a few dragons one of which was Archene. On the way back to Thrakia the Knights were attacked by Sarkan's dragon corps and all but one group of the rescuers were able to get away. that group was able to evade the pursuers by escaping into the Otthelian mines and return to Thrakia with Archene.
For the first 5 years of her life they had no dragons with which to train her and she became wild. A few of the Corean Knights tried to tame her but were unable to.. they then sent her to the elves of Verda. after ten more years they had tamed her a small amount and they sent her to the Nurv Mountains to be trained by the dragons there. The dragons trained her for 40 years and honed her skills. Finally a human boy was born that the elves deemed worthy to be come a rider and who was accepted by Archene who found an immediate fondness for the small child. the first 8 years of his life he lived normally with his family but on his 9th birthday the Thrakians took him and trained him for 2 years and then the elves took him for 4 years and sent him back.for two years he was a lieutenant in the Thrakian army and finally at the age of 17 Archene was allowed to meet him. It was revealed to Thomas that he was to become a rider.
For 4 more years Archene traveled with Thomas but until he proved himself he was not allowed to ride Archene. In order to do this he and Archene killed hundreds of enemies, but over and over again the elves considered them inadequate. Finally Another rider flew forth to challenge them and in their necessity Thomas took flight on Archene and defeated this rider. When they had him at their mercy Thomas decided to free them both and the next time they asked to become true riders it was granted. The elves seemed to have been waiting for the moment when Thomas would ignore their orders and take control of his own destiny. At long last Archene had a rider and yet she felt as though she had lost a part of herself that she would never be able to retrieve. So in a corner of ehr ehart she would always have a part that resented the elves and even Thomas himself for taking away her freedom.
Other: Thrakia was defeated but the royalty and the few dragon and wyvern riders left escaped to their allies farther south. Othellians are even now embroiled in combat with the Sardans for their mistreatment of the dragon race, but Archene and Thomas were unable to find out where their allies escaped to as theywere driven west under the pursuit of the Sardan Riders. ( I am going to say that whenever you can implement a new character that this is when you would meet her or maybe just after they have shaken the pursuers).
uhhh im noobish so i cant put the picture i want up here. sry.
please tell me what you think of this and whether it conflicts too much, or is just to elaborate for a new character at this point in the story. Thank you
Nickname: Werefyre
Age In Moons: 78
Description: 10' tall 12' long
traditional Arthurian dragon. black back and gold stomach. called werefyre because blue shows through her scales whenever she prepares to breathe fire. 4 legs, four feet, five digits each.
The spikes along her back and on her tail are silver.She is a very reclusive dragon and will only warm up to a select few. She is fiercely protective of Thomas her rider but even he has trouble controlling her some times
History: (anything that I put that would interrupt the story please tell me and I will be happy to edit it) she was born in a Sarkan breeding program that breeds dragons in order to harvest their hearts, claws and other valuables. The Knights of Thrakia attacked the site and were able to steal a few dragons one of which was Archene. On the way back to Thrakia the Knights were attacked by Sarkan's dragon corps and all but one group of the rescuers were able to get away. that group was able to evade the pursuers by escaping into the Otthelian mines and return to Thrakia with Archene.
For the first 5 years of her life they had no dragons with which to train her and she became wild. A few of the Corean Knights tried to tame her but were unable to.. they then sent her to the elves of Verda. after ten more years they had tamed her a small amount and they sent her to the Nurv Mountains to be trained by the dragons there. The dragons trained her for 40 years and honed her skills. Finally a human boy was born that the elves deemed worthy to be come a rider and who was accepted by Archene who found an immediate fondness for the small child. the first 8 years of his life he lived normally with his family but on his 9th birthday the Thrakians took him and trained him for 2 years and then the elves took him for 4 years and sent him back.for two years he was a lieutenant in the Thrakian army and finally at the age of 17 Archene was allowed to meet him. It was revealed to Thomas that he was to become a rider.
For 4 more years Archene traveled with Thomas but until he proved himself he was not allowed to ride Archene. In order to do this he and Archene killed hundreds of enemies, but over and over again the elves considered them inadequate. Finally Another rider flew forth to challenge them and in their necessity Thomas took flight on Archene and defeated this rider. When they had him at their mercy Thomas decided to free them both and the next time they asked to become true riders it was granted. The elves seemed to have been waiting for the moment when Thomas would ignore their orders and take control of his own destiny. At long last Archene had a rider and yet she felt as though she had lost a part of herself that she would never be able to retrieve. So in a corner of ehr ehart she would always have a part that resented the elves and even Thomas himself for taking away her freedom.
Other: Thrakia was defeated but the royalty and the few dragon and wyvern riders left escaped to their allies farther south. Othellians are even now embroiled in combat with the Sardans for their mistreatment of the dragon race, but Archene and Thomas were unable to find out where their allies escaped to as theywere driven west under the pursuit of the Sardan Riders. ( I am going to say that whenever you can implement a new character that this is when you would meet her or maybe just after they have shaken the pursuers).
uhhh im noobish so i cant put the picture i want up here. sry.
please tell me what you think of this and whether it conflicts too much, or is just to elaborate for a new character at this point in the story. Thank you