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Post by Fury on Nov 8, 2006 16:40:36 GMT -5
"Some kind of poem" I need to breath... But my heavy heart weighs them down... In out, in out weakly Shooting pain Blind pain Dark, cold, and hard pain Nothing for my pain but more pain Nothing for the cold, hard, and sharp pain
"...." Light lances, Like a key unlocking the soul. Darkness looms, Like a padlock on my heavy heart, They eternally dance. Like Yin And Yan.
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Post by nalia on Nov 8, 2006 18:08:55 GMT -5
Wow, I like the first one. =o
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Post by Serrion on Nov 9, 2006 10:59:47 GMT -5
Yea me to. Though the second one isn't as good.
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Post by Fury on Nov 9, 2006 19:57:39 GMT -5
I have TONS more... like:
"Tears of burning Fate" They burn, Spreading welts across my tortured heart. They warm, Spreading it through my body. They bring sadness, Sorrow for all I've lost... But the pyro of fate Rages nomatter What I do.... Can't see the latter. Help seal my pain... In a broken letter... Flicker now... Flick Er... Now.... Broken up... Nothing left. I love you my burning fate... My burning gate. Bless your mind. ---------------
"I have nothing to live for My eyes are red and sore I don't seem to belong anymore I wish my life could shut like a door
I am all alone,going insane Everything seems to be mundane My life won't end so its filled with sorrowful rain There's more to this life,but what's to mine but pain?" ~Nami Kakashiko (Dragon arts charrie)
"Sorrow" Tears rained from the eyes as death hangs in the air. see the barren grounds here? taste the sadness our on lips... as sorrow reigns the winter
"Love Poem" A single red rose is all it takes to spark joy,while love awakes Nothing can stop it,it stalks your heart You are doomed to feel it,right from the start Dreams will come true...just wait and see 'Cuz the magic's in you...and the magic's in me We are connected,we are the same The will come a day when we will sing in the rain Until that day,my heart stay true and feel no pain Because in the ends we all feel the bends of love.
"Fate" Can we be happy as darkness awaits? To mangle,destroy, and seal our fates? When will we learn, that the pure Will be destroyed and gone forever more. What reasons have I to be glad? When the world's problems make everyone sad? Can this dark gloomy life end? Does the answer lie accross the bend? A sense of doom hange in the air, But does anyone seem to care? No,then why do we mourn for the dead? All these questions buzz around in people's heads...
"Untitled" Do I not seem humane? I laugh,I cry,I feel pain. When the day comes with stereotypes everyone will fall to knees and nobody gripes Can we all truely stay the same? As feelings like love,joy,and such came? Will we every fall triumphant? Or will we die in this land?
"Untitled 2" Life slips away as darkness falls like tears. How can we go on this way? As time fades throught the years? We laughed,we cried,felt happy at times... And yet joy eludes me. Why cant we all feel the pain of those who dies as paths meet and futeres will be. Renewal must come on a dreery day. So how can we go on this way?
"Dragon Waka" Dragons fly above and tear through and fly through the endless skies,while a hunter waits below to fight The dragon is cast down dead
"Screams" A girl with brown hair her screams peircing the air nothing could help her life was ebbing away to this daughter She tried to hold on but her life was shattered away "I will close my eyes and feel no pain today" she says as her eyes shut and close to dream until tomorrow when she wakes with another scream
"Charrie Poem 1" Hero or villan? You must decide for yourself... Ayutsimara. Nobody else's mind can. Life oozes away forget never.
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Post by nalia on Nov 9, 2006 20:12:26 GMT -5
Wow... That's really good Fury. Amazing. See, I just wrote all mine in class today at school, all hurried. xD But your poems... They have feeling, and it sounds like you took your time on these. Very nice. ;D
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Post by Fury on Nov 9, 2006 20:15:11 GMT -5
I always do thanks Nalia...I'll post more in a min.
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Post by Fury on Nov 9, 2006 20:21:12 GMT -5
I'm falling now, catch me please, feel faint, like I've caught a desiese. Please save my soul, I feel so cold, Running away, Am I too bold? There's not enough meaning, There's not enough feeling, Death is in me dealing, I shall see you in heaven. Perhpaps if you promise... Promise we'll see eachother again, Then I won't be so afraid, Or (crud...I'm stuck....)
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Post by nalia on Nov 9, 2006 20:25:34 GMT -5
lol... I can't think of anything at the moment. But you're rolling...
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Post by Fury on Nov 9, 2006 20:46:26 GMT -5
lol thanks...*just had another idea for a poem while I was in the shower* XD
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Post by nalia on Nov 9, 2006 20:53:30 GMT -5
lol.
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Post by Fury on Nov 9, 2006 20:58:56 GMT -5
XD I get inspiration at odd times....usually when I'm in the shower or at 3 AM
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Post by nalia on Nov 10, 2006 12:21:27 GMT -5
XD Gosh, it's the same with me.
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Post by Fury on Nov 10, 2006 18:28:18 GMT -5
lol must be something about poets...
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Post by nalia on Nov 10, 2006 18:29:33 GMT -5
lol. Must be, unless we're a weird bunch.
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Post by Fury on Nov 10, 2006 18:47:30 GMT -5
probably are...
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